When I'm making notes to myself in a draft of any piece of writing, I've taken to using three hash marks front and back to make it stand out.
After one particularly pungent, overwritten phrase in my novel, I wrote
'### ICK!!! ###' and simply moved on.
I find that the more willing I am to do that, to note my dissatisfaction and then charge on with the work, the more work I get done.
'Well, duh!' you might say. But the story's a little more complicated than that. It's not simply that I write more words, but that, in the end, I write better words, too.
This gets back to the point I've made in a couple other posts that it's necessary, if I want to actually get something done, to allow myself to write utter crap. The more freedom I give myself to do that, the more I write and the more good stuff I write.
This works from two angles. The first centers on the fact that you can come back and rewrite (and you will be re-writing, no matter how brilliant the first pass feels to you). The second is that fact that, as a writer freed from his overbearing internal editor, I give myself a chance to write more freely, a chance to have better stuff come out the first time.
An unknown novelist attempting to grow into a little-known novelist. I offer--free of charge--writing tips, anecdotes, short fiction, and assorted ramblings (with photographs and other random tid-bits thrown in for good measure)
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
A Short Story (and more to come) at Amazon
Agendas: a short story
-
Here's the description I used for Kindle and Nook: * * * Hannah Sullivan is not looking to have her beliefs challenged. She is no...
No comments:
Post a Comment